Layout Crits

Layout Crits

When showing the start of my layout to my crit group this was the feedback:

Good feedback:
-Nice layout
- Good font size
- Nice images

To improve:
- Keep one style of layout e.g either keep font square or shape it round items
- Use images to reflect what I'm talking about in that paragraph
- Use similar text to the brand e.g as the brands logo is quite modern, use modern text to follow through the theme

I do have a lot of things to improve on with my layout as I am still figuring out what I want it to look like. The feedback was really helpful giving me a clearer idea of what would look better such as sticking to the same text layout. Also using similar font to the logo will make it relate more to Dolce and Gabbana and show the brand image more clearly. 

The image below shows different texts I have tried. The text on the right was the original text I used which is slightly more old fashioned which doesn't relate to Dolce and Gabbana's logo. Although it could relate to their products as some of their products are quite traditional I wanted to try another font to see what I prefer. The text on the left is a font I think fits more into the Dolce and Gabbana logo theme. I don't think I like it as much however, I am going try it on other pages to see what I prefer also looking at different fonts throughout to see if there is any different ones fit into the theme better.